Been working on website. Let me know what you think?

[ligito]

I agree with the people that say to double check your spelling and grammar.

You are trying to sell a product that is the highlight of your professional presentation.

You may need to get some professional help with your website, to enhance your presentation.

There is a current ad on TV, about that very subject.

[JimYoung]

Dan, i just looked back at your web page.... MUCH BETTER .... I like it..
Jim

[Jigantor]

Hi Microfusion,
Your work is always eye catching.
Good luck mate
Ji

[cncmachinist]

thats cool stuff i do the same but with all CNC machines in microscale and some 0 tolerance clamps

but thats cool stuff wish i could more but there under classified patents

[bert the welder]

Ok

OK, sorry then
Saw it posted, but must have got lost in space
Weirdness

[Broccoli1]

Erased my post? Didn't like my critic?
Don't ask then.

Only Miller dudes & dudettes can remove Posts- probably a 'puter hiccup

[microfusion]

I didn't erase your post.

I didn't erase your post.

[bert the welder]

Erased my post? Didn't like my critic?
Don't ask then.

[mikeswelding]

Ditto on the importance of proofreading and correct language. No, I'm not a grammar nazi. It's just important, when you present yourself as the professional that you are, that the written material on your website reflects that.

[nocheepgas]

"Save you thousands" should probably read something like "production cost are very competitive within the industry" I think I would show one of your laser units in action (like a youtub presentation) on a seperate link just to impress the folks with the complexity of the work. Most businesses looking at your pages are going to have high speed internet connections so loading time will be a minor issue. As indicated above, the large pictures represent a scrolling issue.. you might put a "click to expand" notice on the page to solve that.... see my page example http://jimyo.psend.com/steel.html
but at least use smaller picture formats....
Nice work though
Jim

Just trying to help...


Micro-Fusion welding specializes in precision welding for tool and die, (add a space) injection molding and medical.(Industries?)

As well as a variety of other industries. Incomplete Sentence
From tool and die welding, microscopic welding to laser welding. Incomplete sentence

We have the experience and technology to handle all your precision welding needs.
Our vast knowledge and experience in micro-welding is also complimented Should be spelled "complemented"

by the fact that all of our welders are state certified tool and die makers. So your welding is placed in the hands of an experienced welder and also an experienced mold-maker. Again, not a sentence


We also have a fully equipped tool and die shop, so your tooling can be returned completely finished. (Added a period)

[JimYoung]

"Save you thousands" should probably read something like "production cost are very competitive within the industry" I think I would show one of your laser units in action (like a youtub presentation) on a seperate link just to impress the folks with the complexity of the work. Most businesses looking at your pages are going to have high speed internet connections so loading time will be a minor issue. As indicated above, the large pictures represent a scrolling issue.. you might put a "click to expand" notice on the page to solve that.... see my page example http://jimyo.psend.com/steel.html
but at least use smaller picture formats....
Nice work though
Jim

[NoogaD]

Well, someone who is searching for micro-welding and other precision welding services, probably has an idea of what they are looking at in the pictures. The layout on the homepage is a bit clunky with the vertical scroll of pics. You should seriously go through and correct the spelling errors and punctuation. This represents you and your business, so be precise with your words as well as your welding!

[nocheepgas]

Loaded fine for me.......
Ditto on what the pics are, you may know but others looking at your web site probably have no idea. Like me

[Frank865]

Your page took a LONG time to load?????
I don't like having to scroll to see the whole page.
Some explanation of what you're showing us in the pictures would be nice (blow your own horn a little!)
Otherwise it's looking good.

[microfusion]

Hello everyone,

Been working on website lately adding some pics,etc. Let me know what you think?

http://www.microfusionwelding.com

Thanks
Dan